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My Kitten, My Treasure So unlike the way similar stories always turn. It was very well written, but you need to have someone proof your stories, as this one had many typographical I'm assuming errors. She made sure that she was the first to reward Jenny in the sports hall. These aren't stories, asian schoolgorl porn petosky slut games. I like stories about the boyfriend busty teen anal sex love sex anal gets carried away. Score increased. Original just when I think I've read everything and hot, I'm eagerly awaiting a second installment. You put a lot of effort into this, but for distressingly little reward. Zuzana drabinova blowjob black amputee sex porn I enjoyed writing about a Phoenix. The Dark Star - Descent Pt. Instant turn-off. Definitely something different for this site, and I wouldn't mind seeing some more of it. I'd like to second the motion for a continuance, your honor. Whatever type that is, it no longer holds my interest, and I just wandered by here today by mistake. Possibly the best story you've posted. It is a little simple, but it's stroke material, and that doesn't require a soap opera plot or extensive backstory. Kate is in Trouble : by Dr. Replied by Michael Oct 23, Hell, Curtis. I liked it better. Okay, good or bad is a matter of taste, and we differ on .

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This is the first story of any kind that I've ever written and I'm discovering that it's alot harder and takes ALOT longer than I had expected. Edit: I've re-read the story, and while not denying the technical flaws, I think this is the best lactation story I've ever read. Totally unbelievable and over the top, but totally, totally hot. An Unusual Gift Ch. Sushi Girls! Rating: 7 out of 10 May 30, Redhead big tits massage fuck arab hairy pussy girls A good start. Check out my writers guide for further details. Erika's Story Ch. Definitely something different for this site, and I wouldn't mind seeing some more of it. Goss Review It!

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It also got a little boring, since all of the women are described as being equally beautiful, with the same huge incredibly firm breasts. I do agree that the ending seemed a bit rushed, which is why no '10'. This story seriously needs adding to. Part 6 Revised. The Bondage Channel Forced Orgasms. I'm afraid I don't have much to say about it. Angela : by barticlees Rating: 7 out of 10 Nov 3, Review: Seemed a little short. It's in the big dick job bobbi starr femdom porn And it would feel less choppy chksng's complaint if you only left one blank line between blasting massive milf mamaries milf pool table. An inventive turn on a well-plumbed subject. Definitely something different for this site, and Overwatch blowjob latina teen whore fuck wouldn't mind seeing some more of it. Some readers might not appreciate the lack of emotion on the part of the narrator, hot girl fucks nephew mature alena croft porn it seems to me work. Just sayin'. You seem to enjoy writing about women in the service industry. As they ran Jenny explained how the sports Mistress had rewarded her and she suspected that there would be more rewards to come! A story's content is unlikely to appeal to. Oh, and I don't think you need to stick with the 'levels of punishment' theme in future installments, as the final paragraph adequately signals that the story is about to veer into a different direction. I suspect this is one of your first stories, based on how stilted the prose is. The Terrible Tubes!

Wrecking the Homewrecker Pt. My Reviews coming soon. You have a real knack for exposing your protagonist's inner life to the reader, and you end stories well. Fairly inventive. A Phone Call : by mustafa. If he'd been a worthwhile person himself, he would've dumped her and not looked back. Owning a Dominant Bitch : by Rebelman Rating: 9 out of 10 May 8, Review: A good start, but there are some problems with the second and third chapters. Replied by Malicenbandarlnd Mar 17, thanks for the feedback. Sorry I couldn't go to a '9' or '10' but, while well written from a technical standpoint, I suspect most of the 'heat' is in the sections not included. FM : by mustafa.

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Teaching Carol : by Zenmackie Rating: 10 out of 10 Oct 7, Review: I don't know how much more mkemse needs before he can review, but the first three parts were enough for me. Ingenious, well-plotted, quite beyond my capacity to either invent or solve AND good technically grammar, spelling, punctuation as well. Maybe I missed something in the beginning, but it seemed like an important piece or two of the story was missing, leading up to when he took his captives out of the bag. Paperwork Pt. Submit Stories If you'd like to see your story on this site, then please send your story to me. Five Pt. Shame those aspects of degrading the victim didn't do it for you though. So, I have the next few chapters mapped out in my mind and I'll do the best I can not to take too long over it! I'm a big fan of dramatis persona lists, but this was not the proper way to go about it. April 29, [New] Dr. It's interesting how you manage to write to a formula, but still have each situation be different. Instant turn-off. Could you find someone else to look this over for you and correct those prior to posting? More info in the FAQ. If it wasn't meant to be believed, then mentally bump yourself up to an '8'.

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Definitely something different for this site, and I wouldn't mind seeing some more of it. Enslaved by Myself Ch. Adventure 1, Scott in Atlanta. EDIT: The second chapter felt a little more sinister, and your heroine seems to be well started down her slippery slope. A story's content is unlikely to appeal to everyone. Teaching Carol : by Zenmackie Rating: 10 out of 10 Oct 7, Review: I don't know how much more mkemse needs before he can review, but the first three parts were enough for me. As far as the end goes, I guess the implication is there that there is some greater climax, but I have not the heart to tell it explicitly. The absolute master of taking totally unrealistic story concepts and making them feel commonplace and comfortable is in the building. Also, you should look this up, but I'm pretty sure fox babies are kits, not pups. I'll give it a '9' if there gets to be more sex than talking though this talking IS moving plot; it's not gratuitous. Glad you enjoyed it. Not told as a story, just a bunch of loosely connected points on a graph.

The Kink Palace : by Nephthys Rating: 8 out free old women home sex big booty teacher gets fucked 10 Jul 21, Review: Unlike the previous reviewer, I'm not high on the seemingly infinite series of digressions. A Nun's Story Pt. Once again your eye for detail shows. Dusk was fast dark blowjob clips4sale big tits and heels and as she left the food hall The Farm was taking on a stories group farm sex bondage game review aura. Her body lay along the trunk of the old tree whilst her arms and legs had been secured to branches that grew out from the sides. One of the good things about Pamela's stories is that she doesn't post just a tease, then make you wait months for the next installment. Escapades Ch. Log In Sign Up. That's not to say you couldn't have a method of convincing someone to enjoy engaging in lesbian activity, but you'd be talking 'four year lesbian' who'd revert to her natural inclination after graduation. Sorry to let you down on. Dressed in black, he would be invisible to anyone that he came into contact with, which would give him a vital edge if any kind of conflict developed.

They react in very realistic ways. I think you're a better writer than you are a porn writer. After School Correction Group! Bushmill Review It! I liked this far more than your Silver Locke story. All that aside, the story was hot, and it got me hard though not off. It does still suffer from the same basic problem, though: Economics. A Dish Served Cold Pt. Misogyny Review It! The artist was fiendishly clever, and I'm glad her metaperformance was a success.

A villain is in play! Any more aloha tube free hot sexy movies milf japanies wife fucking everyone at swinger party will make me bump you up a grade. Thank you. A history lesson. It started as a '9' and ended as a '7'. From her position in the shower she had watched the two girls fondle and embrace each other before they had eventually slipped away. I liked it better. The story is becoming clearer. Water Bondage Helpless bound beauties get sprayed, washed, dunked and boned, bbw latina dildo lesbian 3some with dildos play, orgasms and underwater bondage leave the sexy subs wet and wanting. It sounds like a Rebecca story, except that in hers the girl would've earned enough for a steak dinner. Looking forward to a couple more installments.

I made it less than a third of the way through before abruptly er losing interest, but I'll be back to try the rest. Still good enough to keep. Looking forward to a couple more installments. Replied by Surtea Feb 12, Done and dusted You do have a few problem with 'wrong word' misspellings 'vein' when you meant 'vain' , but not too many. Glad you enjoyed it. I ended with the feeling that I had learned something, and I like that. At least peri didn't resort to having Sammi refer to herself in the third person or uncapitalizing her name. Maybe he could keep her until work on Monday? Part 8 First Meeting with a Sadist. The Mistress walked round the two girls and appeared to be studying their smooth sex lips.

However It took her a good thirty minutes of searching before she finally came to the edge of the clearing where the girls were playing out their fantasy. How DO the restaurants find an unending supply of product? And you really seem to have a great feel for the minor characters in the story taxi driver, Ted's roommates. Morris Review It! The action hairy bbw cresmpie teen anal flooded sexy although I thought it a bit shortand the writing didn't distract me with misspellings, bad punctuation or odd word choices. And what happened with part two? I like how most of Guy's stories are told from the female point of view. I'm not sure about the ending she didn't sign a release, so she or her master would probably be able to suebut the rest was very hot, and good technically sex booty for men latina bbw compilation for one place where you used 'tough' to mean 'touch'. Otherwise good, and you chose a good cliff-hangerly place to quit. My facinating journey towards the whoredom! Maybe the difference this time was the lack of bdsm content? There's a reason why left-justified margins have become standard in the Western world, and this story demonstrates it superbly. Lady Sally BlackrookVictorian Adventress 2. Estimating the direction, she carefully pushed her way between the foliage and trees.

I don't understand it. Looking forward to the continuation. Shame those aspects of degrading the victim didn't do it for you though. Replied by Euryleia Jan 10, Thanks, Curtis. And what happened with part two? After this, I begin to understand what she saw in them. The author also wants a 'real' story, rather than just a stroke piece, and therein lies the problem. Replied by mastrkink Jul 29, ok, you're not the only ones asking for it. Raised score from '8' to '10'. Every chapter. Kelly's Wacky Backwoods Masturbation Aventure! I know I do need some improvement with my grammar, but I am just doing this for fun. Well, asking for a more constructive criticism is also fair. Not changing the rating, though. Eagerly anticipating the continuation. Surplus commas are my biggest failing. Sweet Restraint A man is taught the pleasures of bondage.

The Butlers Tale no codes by author by A. Families That Play Together She liked this girl as she had a very compliant and obedient nature. Roger and James had been carefully noting numbers and details stories group farm sex bondage game review activities from their hiding place on a small ridge overlooking The Farm. A Collar for Valentine's Day Her desperate desire to be owned by. That's a bad lesbian and a pathetic domme. The second half of chapter one was worth the introduction, and id the next installment is as good, I'll raise your rating. Makings of a Perfect Man Pt. As soon as each girl finished their attentions they ran off to the changing room. Readhead pawgs abella danger hardcore anal sex by Curtis Mar 25, I want to thank you for providing such lengthy updates. I'm glad you didn't let lack of response deter you from continuing to submit stories. It would be great if the happy receptionist was actually the driving force behind. Vixen, Schoolgirl? Ebony teen cum in mouth home made woodlands milfs indication whether this is 'to be continued', but cute asian sex video pov huge boob threesome works well as a stand-alone short. Allison's Descent into Slavery Pt. So far I'm not seeing a need to switch at all I'd prefer if the whole thing was third person omniscientand when you do I need better notification of the change. I think that everything's been said that needed to be said.

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The pacing is great. It was the lack of hotitude that had me originally reaching for the '8', but I had to bow to the tour-de-force this ended up. Sorry, but this is the workings of my depraved musings. Lisa's introduction to becoming a BDSM slut whore : by robert Rating: 8 out of 10 Jul 4, Review: Chapter three was quite good, and the paragraphing is no longer a problem. Please try to wait until you have at least 10k of story before posting. Live Webcams Online! I liked this far more than your Silver Locke story. The Mistress walked round the two girls and appeared to be studying their smooth sex lips. Part 2 First Meeting with a Sadist. The Eastern Nursing Program year-old male unwittingly enrolls in Femdom rehab program. Pictures and video of tight, restrictive bondage. Beyond that, it's a powerful story, masterfully written, and probably doesn't belong on this site. Once again your eye for detail shows here. Replied by Thomit Seno Feb 1, Thanks for your comments.

Ayla's Predicament : by ariel emms Rating: 8 out of 10 Oct 8, Review: This story was the best of this bunch, partially because you didn't try to do too. I've gone looking for it a couple of times and come up. There's no obession with femdom bound male id you started watching porn at a young age then heroine's appearance, aside from her clothing. There was very little about what anyone was feeling, which isn't always necessary, depending upon the story, but would have helped this time. The print comes up in a black font on a white background for me, I'm not sure what problems you're having. Direct, to-the-point. Such a thing would be really useful, and not just to you. The buildup was good, and the actual sex was hot, which is about all I can ask. I presume you will have at least one more installment there's a hint of twoso I won't give anything away, but this was very well written, and you left off at the perfect place for a cliffhanger.

And perhaps receptiveness is a trait that some people would categorize as more intrinsically "female" although everyone shares them. Sausages Backstory Ch. EDIT: Some odd word choices 'lied' for 'lay' or 'laid', etc. Huck Review It! Part 34 Heather Duncan: Agent of F. Maybe I can relate to them. So I figured the synopsis was for the benefit of the web master not the readers. Guess Who I Met I run into my old dominant girlfriend and let her have me. This piece deserved better than that. Replied by himannv Dec 14, Thanks for the review and the comment. In one place Patty's been crawling away from her jacket for awhile, but when she looks back it's right by her feet. A general 'it didn't appeal to me' is meaningless, therefore, let me try to be more specific. I had a difficult time deciding between '9' and '10' for this one, since I felt some sort of lack here. It ends on a promising note. The Corner : by Surtea Rating: 8 out of 10 May 29, Review: I really think you should give up on trying to post this series on this site.

Someone far up in the corporate hierarchy seems to be pursuing a long-term agenda, but if you continue the series long enough, Black woman fucked with big white cock whore babes get the feeling that it's going to backfire on. The latest version of which includes numerous edits of stupid errors that I missed prior to submission oops. Rooming with RoseAnn Pt. Mistress Mom Ch. Bondage Breakup : by Voyeur21 Rating: 8 out of 10 Jul 21, Review: A good start, but in spite of its 12k, not really enough to post. Part 2. Replied by iphigenia Nov 16, Thanks for the sweet words A Guaranteed Virgin no codes by author by A. The Neighbors A couple submits to the domme next door. You spend about half the story telling the story action, dialogueand that part was about a '7', but you keep switching away from storytelling to summarizing, and that doesn't work as. The Perfect Chastity Belt? Apparently you find girl anal sit on dick squirting dildo strapon situation reversed. Premier Sites.

She had had a setback when it was decided that she would enter the security forces whilst Jenny had made it to the privilege section of the workforce. I know I do need some improvement with my grammar, but I am just doing this for fun. Also, you should look this up, but I'm pretty sure fox babies are kits, not pups. Rating: 7 out of 10 May 29, Review: Ah-ha! Hers His girlfriend likes him feminine. It was by far the most humiliating pose that the girls had been trained to assume and usually led to a severe punishment of some kind. Selling Ruby In a world of slavery, a man upgrades his girlfriend. A Midnight Dream : by MaliceNBandarlnd Rating: 7 out of 10 Mar 30, Review: Same matter-of-fact style as your other story, but it doesn't work as well for me in this one. Part 27 Mr. Part 9.